I think I will leave it as it is for now and write it as I was intending, like you say it will either work with the rest of the narrative or it won’t, but I can hardly try to guess which it will be until I get further into the writing.
Should get quite a way into it over this weekend as I’ve set myself a target of atleast 4 hours per day in front of the computer. Whether I actually get 4 hours of writing is debatable, last night I sat there for an hour and wrote 1 line
appreciate all the feedback, i'll post when I have more