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Old 10-08-2012, 06:57 AM   #8
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I second that recommendation. I only recently re-read it and have to admit that I didn't notice the foul language. Not saying it wasn't there, only that whatever was there didn't strike me as out of place or gratuitous.

Not a careful reader then

The first half of the book has far more then the second half, and really I only noticed it because HE calls attention to it. Spends several pages as I recall talking about how your characters must curse if fits then and etc. Seemed like to me in those pages he had a personal vendetta to curse as much as he could.

Either way, was just tossing it out as a warning since that kind of language is not typically in that kind of book.
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