Thread: MobileRead Short Story Anthology - [DISCUSSION & REVIEW]
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Old 03-24-2014, 11:20 AM   #209
Graham
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Originally Posted by mrmarlowe View Post
Dave - v.1-1 now up.
Nice one. You've fixed quite a few things.

Spoiler:
I didn't see the ending coming!

I like it.



I'll leave it for others to read now and give their first impressions.

Graham
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