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Old 10-26-2009, 10:20 AM   #14
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Originally Posted by ficbot View Post
I read Black Silk and thought it was well-written, but much too short. It needed a little more build-up for me. It was like he sees her once and it's true love...
Silk is a novella and therefore necessarily short. If you're old enough to remember "The Flying Fickle Finger of Fate" then you'll know that Fate pops up in the most unexpected of places!

The sequel, on which I'm working, will be longer and somewhat darker.

Thank you for your kind comments on my writing.

--JanG.
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