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Originally Posted by desertgrandma
The word "werewolf' is used way too often.
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Originally Posted by dreams
I love werewolf stories! I just played a little on the synopsis wording (hope you don't mind).... Now, just waiting for the rest of this exciting story  |
Far be it for me to step into
desertgrandma's shoes, but I think the point she was trying to make was that you used the word "werewolf" too frequently in a short paragraph.
Much as
Dreams has indicated...in that 'little play'....
Other than that, I might be 'hooked' ....