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ChipAtOuse · 02-09-2013, 09:21 AM

This newer version (V2) has a couple of changes. At the suggestion of bobcdy, I have indented the paragraphs and slightly decreased the paragraph spacing. Any other criticisms, suggestions, and the like would be appreciated.

Thanks,
chip
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02-09-2013, 09:21 AM	#2
ChipAtOuse Member Posts: 10 Karma: 7076 Join Date: May 2012 Location: Upstate NY Device: Nook Glo, Nook Color (N2A)	Upated to Version 2 This newer version (V2) has a couple of changes. At the suggestion of bobcdy, I have indented the paragraphs and slightly decreased the paragraph spacing. Any other criticisms, suggestions, and the like would be appreciated. Thanks, chip __________________ “Words are, of course, the most powerful drug used by mankind.” ― Rudyard Kipling