I've had some editing work done on it, you'll need to request a new version from Amazon, or PM me an email address and I'll send you one. The main difference is the Simon sub-plot has been separated out into its own story instead of interspersed amid the biker plot. It also starts with Lynn in the petrol station, I dropped the flash-forward prologue where they kill the policeman, that's going to be reworked/expanded into a standalone short story.
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