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Originally Posted by Joykins
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Oh dear!
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The enthused barbarian swilveled about, his shock of fiery red hair tossing robustly in the humid air currents as he faced the attack of the defeated soldier's fellow in arms.
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I get quite a few requests for a read/review on my site. Actually most of the samples are not that bad. I have to reject many many more than I accept so it makes the selection criteria a little more difficult than it would be had all the authors written ridiculous prose.
But if I find a sample that is written in the key of clunk, out it goes.