Thread: Does this blurb sound okay?
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Old 12-15-2011, 10:33 AM   #14
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Originally Posted by VydorScope View Post
You could say something like...

"A 1970s style violent pulp fiction
I argue that if he had to say that explicitly, then the blurb failed.
"Show them, don't tell them" and all that.
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