Thread: Does this blurb sound okay?
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Old 12-15-2011, 09:43 AM   #11
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Originally Posted by ApK View Post
If you're going for some humor, I like that last a lot.
It's actually quite a grim story, but I'm aiming for a sort of 1970s style violent pulp fiction blurb for it. (Which is basically what it is). Another line to add in there somewhere is this:

Don't let your granny read this -- unless your granny is a biker bitch from hell.
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