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Old 08-07-2010, 03:36 PM   #10
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Originally Posted by Bilbo1967 View Post
I think I must be a very inattentive reader though. I didn't. Notice the short. Sentences. Mentioned. Above. Nor did I notice the changing POV of the books (and I read most of them back-to-back). I guess I just got into the story and didn't notice the way it was written.
Here's the beginning of "One Shot:"

Friday. Five o'clock in the afternoon. Maybe the hardest time to move unobserved through a city. Or maybe the easiest.

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