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Old 03-11-2014, 03:07 PM   #100
mrmarlowe
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Originally Posted by Katsunami View Post
You can say that again.



This is a huge spoiler. If you don't want to spoil a large part of the new version, don't open this. It contains part of one of Graham's suggestions.

Spoiler:

Something like that will indeed happen now, but I will connect Elani's resolution of her crisis and the fact that clerical magic is given, not studied.




In the new version, they will still be very good friends, but Elani will:

Spoiler:

- Have a trait that ticks off Koryna to no end.
- Be a less powerful priestess than Koryna is. This will give Koryna some air of self-importance, bolstered by the fact that she is assistant, and Elani is not.




It was meant to say "barely." This typo was a guru meditation error, caused by leprecauns carrying my upload bits in the wrong order

Do you have any suggestions regarding the dialog? I think Graham already said everything else.
[Regarding something you'd posted about the issue with the spell checker of Libre office] While the leperchauns are at it, maybe you could switch to openoffice and see if that improves anything. Or if you don't mind something without the 'automated spell check tool' function then focuswriter is excellent.
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