Jake,
I would have left a review over at smashwords, but I cannot because I have not purchased it.
Overall, I really liked the read. I thought it would take me a bit longer to read the book, but it kept me very interested and I finished it in about 3 days.
The book flowed nicely through the story line and did not feel like there were any gaps, like some books that I have read recently had.
I only noticed about four or so grammatical errors, but I forgot to bookmark the pages to refer to them in this reply (I need to do that in the future, so I can give a better review), but it did not make reading less interesting.
I look forward to the sequel when it comes out.