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looking for feedback on three novel blurbs
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05-17-2013, 02:14 PM
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So, the blurb is much better, but it reads rough. It might just be me, the content is great, loads and loads better, but the English feels a bit broken. Maybe its all the hard stops in the flow? Not sure.
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