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Gregory Faccone · 12-19-2012, 04:04 PM

I am partial to the classic three paragraph blurb format.

I think your blurb first draft is interesting. I would add some "punch" (pun intended) to the middle section. That is where the protagonist's world is really supposed to be rocked.

Is the introduction to underground fighting the biggest thing that ever happened to your protagonist? Or was it meeting that other fighter? Neither?

12-19-2012, 04:04 PM	#14
Gregory Faccone Junior Member Posts: 8 Karma: 470352 Join Date: Dec 2012 Location: Somewhere in North America Device: kindle	I am partial to the classic three paragraph blurb format. I think your blurb first draft is interesting. I would add some "punch" (pun intended) to the middle section. That is where the protagonist's world is really supposed to be rocked. Is the introduction to underground fighting the biggest thing that ever happened to your protagonist? Or was it meeting that other fighter? Neither? Last edited by Gregory Faccone; 12-19-2012 at 05:34 PM.