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Old 10-26-2012, 08:17 AM   #8
Alex Bleach
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Originally Posted by mr ploppy View Post
The book itself is written from Abby's perspective and full of yeah, etc. But you're right, the blurb is always the hardest part.
I like the blurb as well. In the first paragraph I'm being pedantic, but I'd stick a comma in here:
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I was just your average street-fighting hustler, yeah? Smacking people around for fun and taking the contents of their wallets to pay for a night out on the booze with my mate Shaz. Life was simple back then. We were always skint, but it was a good laugh.
I think the title of the book will sell it or at least get you a lot of interest.
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