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Old 07-13-2012, 12:49 AM   #2
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i was reading the sample on smashwords. i'm wondering why each page has text on less than half of it. at first i thought it was for effect, but it's making the conversation between pettigrew (did i recall the name correctly) and the pilot feel disjointed. or is it supposed to do that?
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