OK. I have read the sample and it just cost me a couple of quid. Grrrrr
I understand what dadioflex was saying about the 'I' thing but It did not bother me. Maybe a little over descriptive in places but I finished the sample and wanted to finish the story. That's good isn't it? I still recommend you write a short, preferably in the same universe and put it out there.
Now to find time to read the rest of the bloody book. Pah, Authors, who'd have em.
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