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Originally Posted by Kemp
Hey everyone!
I really appreciate the kind words and recommendations.
*sigh* I do admit that Haven seems to be quite due for another edit, mostly on the proofreading front.
Although good news for fans of the world; once I finish the first edit of another project (new novel!), I'm thinking of piecing together a short story in the Haven universe.
Again, thanks for the support.
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I think it would do good with another edit/proofread, but I have seen paper published books way worse than this one.
I also wish there was a quick way to note a page on my Sony that could get fed back up. One thing that might help, search for ';;', you will find one place that kind of had me stumble.
Either way, I really enjoyed your work. I think the story was great, and the rest was not enough to really distract me (although there were a few places that pulled me out of the book).
--Carl