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5 Mistakes Of New Fiction Writers
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06-17-2012, 12:33 PM
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Fbone
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I don't know which mistake this falls under but I often see an overuse of pronouns when I sample the indie titles in KDP Select.
"He turned left ..." "He walked towards the ..." "He heard ..." "He stopped ..."
"I ... " "I ... " "I ... " "I ... "
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