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Old 05-11-2011, 11:05 AM   #1058
GeoffC
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Originally Posted by Vandy View Post

@GeoffC It concerns you, not! ...

This is the type of open verse that is just vague enough to really appeal to me.

From a pure message pont of view, you couldn't be any clearer in your instructions to your reader -- "step right on by nothing of interest here;".

Your word imagery is consise, to the point and still compelling. To me, the piece breathes authority and a vivid sense of purpose.

Thank you, Geoff, for a wonderful and entertaining read!


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