Originally Posted by Vandy
@GeoffC It concerns you, not! ...
This is the type of open verse that is just vague enough to really appeal to me.
From a pure message pont of view, you couldn't be any clearer in your instructions to your reader -- "step right on by nothing of interest here;".
Your word imagery is consise, to the point and still compelling. To me, the piece breathes authority and a vivid sense of purpose.
Thank you, Geoff, for a wonderful and entertaining read!
Regards,
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