Thread: Dralin, a fantasy novel by John H. Carroll
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Old 07-12-2017, 08:06 PM   #17
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As I've progressed in my path as a writer, I've learned many things. Most importantly, the quality of my writing has improved.

I've done a thorough re-edit of Dralin, removing over 2000 unnecessary words that slowed down the flow. All links in the first post of this thread now have the new cleaner version. The story hasn't changed, but it's much easier to read.

All my best.
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