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Old 08-03-2015, 11:57 AM   #2828
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Originally Posted by annalordauthor View Post
Hi everyone, feel free to download a complimentary copy of The Lammas Curse, the second in my Watson & The Countess series.

Please do let me know what you think.

-Anna




http://www.amazon.com/dp/B00ZWTRVHE


I stopped reading right here, at this quote:

"'Isn't that the place where Sir Henry Baskerville's neighbor; [sic] the squire of Drogo; [sic] shot his first stag?'"

You would be advised to either get an editor for this book, or else study examples on the differences between commas and semi-colons.

I'm sorry, but this type of error is only 100 or so WORDS into your novel, and acts as a deterrent toward further reading. You only have one chance to make a favorable impression, I'm afraid.
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