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Old 08-23-2013, 07:37 AM   #23
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Perhaps the term on the tip of your tongue is "alternate reality" or "parallel world".

Yes, I agree that it would easily solve the problem of the future Oxford she creates.

Only if you can believe that time machines could be simpler to build and operate than mobile phone networks....


But it's not really the technology that's the problem in the Oxford sections. It's the characters (& their actions) that don't ring true, IMO.
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