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Old 09-29-2011, 03:29 PM   #277
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Originally Posted by badgoodDeb View Post
Nope -- it looks fine. A comma might clarify the final two phrases, but other than that, it is fine!
Thanks BGD! I think I put the comma in the right place...
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