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Old 04-10-2010, 01:01 AM   #3
lene1949
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Originally Posted by Moejoe View Post
Mine was this:

His head shook in time with his hands. A secret metronome that kept the time of a song only he could hear.

I wrote it when I was fourteen and I knew I wanted to be a writer at that moment. Now, if I could only write a second sentence.
Great sentence...

Glad to see you're still here, Moejoe.
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