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Old 04-09-2010, 05:42 PM   #2
Moejoe
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Mine was this:

His head shook in time with his hands. A secret metronome that kept the time of a song only he could hear.

I wrote it when I was fourteen and I knew I wanted to be a writer at that moment. Now, if I could only write a second sentence.
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