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Old 02-04-2010, 06:15 PM   #2
Acreo Aeneas
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Very nice visuals and almost like how I imagined Freeground to be. However, the VO needs work. It's partly the script's cheeseyness and the voice quality is pretty bad (maybe due to compression?). Kind of sounds like it was recorded in a small bathroom while the guy was on the toilet.

Maybe shorten the hyperspace/star whizzing by part and extend the beginning animation a bit?
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