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Old 01-04-2010, 03:26 AM   #3
mtravellerh
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Edit: So, hab das mit dem doppelten zweiten Kapitel verbessert! Die Erzählsprünge rühren wohl von May her, der einzelne Kurzgeschichten nur lose verbunden hat. Ich werde aber noch einmal Text und Vorlage gründlich mit einander vergleichen!

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