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Old 08-02-2009, 09:01 AM   #3
Dr. Drib
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Thanks, Moejoe.

Sounds like noir all the way, which is what I like. We can use the first line as a starting point for some noir shenanigans. To wit:

She came along the alley and up the back steps skipping and hopping like an agitated grassphopper that's just been sprayed with a biopesticide repellent, her body lithe and active in its tight-fitting clothing, the expression on her face pinched in agony as she said to me, "Where's the bathroom, buddy?"


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