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Old 06-05-2009, 04:20 PM   #161
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Originally Posted by Peverel View Post
Currently working on a short story set in the near future - next 100 years. Told from the perspective of a dead man......

Starts like this:

So I died, and to be totally honest with you it was a lot more painful than I had expected. A hell of a lot more painful. But then again I am fairly sure that you are not supposed to remember the actual death part, if you know what I mean.

No, you don't, do you?

You're aware of Life Extension Technologies Inc.?

No?

Okay, I think I had better explain a little.

Actually, I had better go back to the very beginning really.
I like that sort of thing. A suggestion: add in a bit more confusion to show that the process is fairly traumaitc from a psychologic perspective.
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