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Old 03-23-2009, 03:39 PM   #8
DixieGal
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IMO (not so humble, unfortunately), your greatest strength right now is the ending. I'm very impressed that you seem to have a talent for ending the story just at the point where it leaves you wondering if the story is really finished. Like a good Twilight Zone episode.

Sort of like "The End?"

I think you are a very talented storyteller and I look forward to reading more from you in the years to come.
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