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Old 03-04-2009, 06:17 AM   #53
GeoffC
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Originally Posted by desertgrandma View Post
The word "werewolf' is used way too often.
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I love werewolf stories! I just played a little on the synopsis wording (hope you don't mind).... Now, just waiting for the rest of this exciting story
Far be it for me to step into desertgrandma's shoes, but I think the point she was trying to make was that you used the word "werewolf" too frequently in a short paragraph.
Much as Dreams has indicated...in that 'little play'....


Other than that, I might be 'hooked' ....
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