Originally Posted by desertgrandma
The word "werewolf' is used way too often.
Originally Posted by dreams
I love werewolf stories! I just played a little on the synopsis wording (hope you don't mind).... Now, just waiting for the rest of this exciting story
Far be it for me to step into desertgrandma
's shoes, but I think the point she was trying to make was that you used the word "werewolf" too frequently in a short paragraph.
Much as Dreams
has indicated...in that 'little play'....
Other than that, I might be 'hooked' ....