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Old 02-20-2009, 07:02 AM   #5
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Originally Posted by Dr. Drib View Post
Yes, what Harry is talking about is called a run-on sentence. It's very easy to fix: Just insert "as" before the word "he." [...as he stood up....]
Yes, that's a lot better than either of my two suggestions - thanks!
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