[Dr. Drib]

Welcome to Mobileread.

If this short example is any indication of the issues you face with the English language, then you should seriously think about withdrawing your novel from Amazon and have it professionally edited.

For example:

"tall balled man"
"The air fulfilled by smell..."
"I kept silence because...."
"...I heard voices out the flat"
"You'd better get out here"
"From the one hand..."
"..it is another ques- tion"
"..he shouted, caught me like"

As can be seen by these many examples, you face serious syntactical and grammatical issues. As well, there are issues regarding tense.

Once these issues are addressed, you will have a much better chance of 'selling' your ebook.

Thank you.