looking for feedback on three novel blurbs
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05-13-2013, 08:49 AM
Join Date: Jun 2011
Device: Kindle Fire HD 7
The first two I like, but the third.. I think that last line needs help. Maybe...
"That is until the mobster finds out she took it"
I am HORRIBLE at blurbs, so do not take my advice to highly.
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