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Old 02-22-2013, 07:06 AM   #5
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Mainly I find that have to watch for redundant clauses and editorial notes. Things like "he looked around and saw". There's a lot you write because you write what's happening in your head, it's only when you come back that you realise that the reader will do many those bits for you, you don't need to tell them.
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