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Old 01-18-2013, 10:04 AM   #13
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I agree being concise is important. If the author is vague about details and about what is going on why will the reader want to keep on reading? A story should be clear as to what is going on, who is involved and what the stakes are should the protagonist fail to reach his/her goal.
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