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Originally Posted by fjtorres
I *was* wondering how you were going to shoehorn all those concepts into a short story. Your milieau really sounds like it's better suited to a full novel.
Some ideas just need elbow room.
Go gettem!  |
I disagree. The short story is just about my favorite form when done well, and I think this was done very well on a lot of points. Not say there couldn't be some important stuff added, but I hope you don't go TOO far over 10000 words!