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Old 12-09-2012, 03:02 PM   #9
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Thanks....I've only heard from one person that it didn't grab them by page one. However, I've been thinking about revising the opening a little to grab them at paragraph one.

After about 5,000 or 6,000 words then I'll see what I can go back and change.
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