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Old 12-09-2012, 01:44 PM   #8
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His (?) advice about opening with some action, depending on your genre is smart, his advice on dialog is way off. I have not had a chance to read your link yet, but as everyone here has said... dialog needs to be REAL or do not bother with it.
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