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Old 12-09-2012, 09:44 AM   #2
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I disagree with the advice you've been given. Dialogue should be realistic, or else it will sound artificial. Just imagine the conversation that you want to take place, and write it down verbatim.

BTW - one of my pet hates . There's no such word as "alot". It's "a lot" - two separate words.
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