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Old 09-28-2012, 11:59 AM   #6
John Carroll
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That was good. I think the hack one played with fear well, but didn't really stir emotions. With the first clip, I wanted to know what happened next. It didn't hurt that the woman was hot as well . . . not that I'm swayed by that sort of thing in advertising . . .
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