Thread: They Were Perfect by Eric Chase (Free Poetry)
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Old 09-20-2012, 09:11 AM   #4
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summing up: you loved few and hated everything.

not quite impressed. Not even some structure, metric, aliterations or rhymes to break from the boredom of the contents...
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