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Old 08-28-2012, 09:33 PM   #23
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Originally Posted by Steven Lyle Jordan View Post
[...]Once upon a time, a little girl on her way to Grandmother's house had an embolism and died before she got there.

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Not a good story.
It's got possibilities. Wolf tracks spotted nearby; the grandmother found dead too leading to suspicion of a serial killer; some person calling to take responsibility for her murder; call in Dr Grey and/or the team from CSI (pick your favourites); some sexual tension among the investigating team; a prankster that disturbs the evidence. It could take a good 800 pages before we finally found out for certain that the little girl's death really was natural.
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