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Old 08-28-2012, 06:31 PM   #22
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Originally Posted by Steven Lyle Jordan View Post
You are not "fate." You are a writer who determines what happens in your own stories. And since what happens in your stories should be chosen according to how it improves the story, choosing acts at random is contrary to good storytelling.

Once upon a time, a little girl on her way to Grandmother's house had an embolism and died before she got there.

The End


Not a good story.
No it isn't. However remember it is one you wrote.
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