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Old 07-09-2012, 11:58 AM   #8
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Originally Posted by VydorScope View Post
I am reading some documentation from a vendor that is trying to do business with us. Top give you an idea of the intend audience for this document, I work at a university with 95k students. This vendor is trying to get in to do business with us. In their docs they have jewels like:



Yes that is complete text, starts the new sentence with the lower case "l" and carries on.



I removed the company name and replaced it with "<company name>" to protect the not so innocent. The rest is exactly as printed.

And then there is this sentence that gives the reason to import data:



And one more jewel for your reading pleasure...



I can understand a minor typo or two in a decent sized document, but if you are sending a document to a potential client, that you hope to make a big chunk cash from for an extended contract... at least higher a burger-flipping English grad student to edit it. Sheesh!
I can see another typo..........anyone ??
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