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Old 06-19-2012, 09:41 PM   #18
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But the average reader is going to think, "coaxial? What does that mean?" and communication is broken as said reader either hunts for meaning, or skips it, carrying on not knowing what was meant.

Surely writing is entirely about communication. Don't perturb the reader's dream with overly specialised words.
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