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Old 06-15-2012, 06:55 AM   #6
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When I look at my old stuff I tended to over-write things (like 3 pages of someone making a cup of tea, or droning on for ages about what clothes people are wearing). I still do that a bit now, but it gets cut after the first draft unless it's a fight scene. I also drift tense quite a lot, but I can spot that easily enough in the last read through.
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