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Old 11-14-2011, 09:15 PM   #12
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Bill might think feelings, but I don't think he's gonna think about feelings. I would leave out the "I felt "
This is a very interesting thought I did not consider. Perhaps instead of "I felt bad for him" it would be better phrased "The poor kid..."
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